A new topic here. For all poetry lovers

A new topic here.. for all poetry lovers
friends here we have to post poetries only and comments abt the abt one

as u ppl know i make my own poetries aswell so here i go with one of my few poetries..

kehti Thi JO , Ke kAhin choroge to nahi?
aaj khud chor gayi dehko
Kehti thi jo, ke kahin monh moroge to nahi?
aaj khud monh mor gayi dekho.
jinke liye humne kardiye kai hasinaaein kurbaan
aaj woh khud humara dil tor gayi dekho..
marta tha ye tanha-e-najib jispe
aaj woh khud sare rishte tor gayi dekho
hay ishq kee bazi to JEET wa HAAR ka medaan
aaj humein haar-e-huwe aashique ka naam degayi dekho
ae Jaaneman ab tak shayari karta rahoon tumpe ?
ke shayari ke liye lafz kamm par gaye hain dekho